Holy shit, you do have long arms! If you want to use this to your advantage, try experimenting with flow on the sides and above your torso, such that one arm has to be extended all the way.

Sorry, I don't have much critique to offer right now. It seems your at a point where you've got good ideas that will naturally clean themselves up, just from dancing around your buddies regularly. This is a great improvement in technique over the carwash clip I saw of you, so I'm expecting good things from the 2nd clip.

wow, i heard those drums drop and i was like...this is gonna gonna be rough as hell for tom.  kudos for trying to take on that track, although i think it raped you. :P  when i said open up your hand distancing, i didnt mean it completely change what you do with your liquid.  this clip really had almost no elements that you've always had in your liquid style.  i'd like to see the same stuff you do with short hand distanced liquid...just move your hands farther apart.  no need even for new patterns or concepts, the same stuff done with more distance is what i think would look great.

i don't know what you mean by a regular clip?

AH ic...And so I'm told, probably something to that. 

At any rate, by the end of the month I will work on bringing the party to the living room and the whole distance thing.  Thought i did an o.k. job in the above but I guess not.  The hard part is knowing I'm going to have to listen to this track a few more times and know what it's done to me already :( with each high hat I cringe.