dammit i had to type this up twice, too early :)
definite improvement here, more energy, more hand relationship and straiter angles. this track however lol, still demands faster liquid and harder stops than what ur currently doin, dont sweat that tho as any of us would have a hell of a time getting down to this song. i DO have a couple suggestions for you to work on though:
1. threads, my experience with them is that you get the biggest illusion when one part is moving and the other is perfectly still, think of it in a miming aspect, putting your arm in the box/hole or the box/hole over your arm, if both parts are moving the illusion gets weaker, this is something i havent fully developed with my threads yet but plan to.
2. rewinds, i dont really use them much at all. but from what i observe theres 2 things u should keep in mind about them. they are best when only done once(you do alot in succession). and are best when surrounding a significant/blowup move or atleast at the very end of a movement, you were using them at parts where ur halfway through a movement or on a basic movement.
diggin the clip tho, expecting you to kill it this weekend tho
