How have you only been doing this 9 months?

sweet progress! especially liked the last minute you seemed more comfortable and doing riskier stuff

i feel not that helpful critiquing, what with u being surrounded by yodas and all. but heres what i would like to see more of anyway :)

-less stuff in the front torso area, this includes using space around you more and using wierd postures. bugout exponentially increases when your body is contorted more :)
-larger hand distancing, you have the close range stuff but it needs contrast to fully shine. this includes spatial isolation
-less stop and go maybe, ur style is less basic geometric angles so i dont think pauses/stops play to it well, perhaps try more controlled speed changes, animation-esque
-that adidas track, on or around my person

sweet progress! especially liked the last minute you seemed more comfortable and doing riskier stuff

i feel not that helpful critiquing, what with u being surrounded by yodas and all. but heres what i would like to see more of anyway :)

-less stuff in the front torso area, this includes using space around you more and using wierd postures. bugout exponentially increases when your body is contorted more :)
-larger hand distancing, you have the close range stuff but it needs contrast to fully shine. this includes spatial isolation
-less stop and go maybe, ur style is less basic geometric angles so i dont think pauses/stops play to it well, perhaps try more controlled speed changes, animation-esque
-that adidas track, on or around my person

stop and go + axis shifts + more geometric angles + what your already doing + 1 on the wanting track jacket = win sauce.

How have you only been doing this 9 months?

she had been living with Houdoken and she likely goes out and dances with people like Lucas and Tiny at least twice a month if not more.  combine that with the 3 years prior dance experience.

thanks for the encouragement and advice all!  on point tawmi. i'm trying to work with different direction than where i was plowing around in previous clips this summer. there's alot of new and awkward things to hammer out so the word is most appreciated. no doubt i'm syced to invest alot of patience and meticulousness in these pursuits :)

Quote from: a thing on September 07, 2010, 08:58:59 PM

How have you only been doing this 9 months?

she had been living with Houdoken and she likely goes out and dances with people like Lucas and Tiny at least twice a month if not more.  combine that with the 3 years prior dance experience.

you left out the part about all the crack smoke! being a hollow-minded science experiment characterized only by my experiences and encounters with others, one cannot forget to credit crack as part of this flashy evo-dance cheatcode!!